Sunday, November 15, 2009
YOUR FAVORITE PLOT OUTLINE FOR "UNINVITED GUESTS"
Read each plot outline for "Uninvited Guests" that was provided on the Nov. 3 Post, and provide a comment about the plot outline that you think will make the most interesting mystery. Keep in mind that these outlines are skeletons of what will soon be a full-blown mystery. Your comment should be thoughtful and detailed. This comment is due NO LATER THAN 11:59 P.M, NOVEMBER 30, 2009.
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My favorite plot outline is David's. I feel that he took a lot of time to think about the plot of his story and that the details of his outline truely show it. From the "skeleton," I can already tell that the story will be very interesting and thought provoking, if not somewhat unsettling and gritty (as a mystery should be). Well done!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite plot outline is David Taylors. I don't read for the fun of it but if there was a book with David's plot I would go buy it. It seems to be a great scary mystery that is filled with twist and turns. It seemed like David put alot of time into this and is already worthy of being the next R.L. Stine.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite outline so far is David Taylor's. It seems like he really took his time on this story. It was very detailed and thought through. From hearing his "skeleton", if this were a real story i would certainly purchase this book. GREAT JOB DAVID!!! Keep up the good work. It will surely take you places!
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DAVID TAYLORS UNINVITED GUEST WAS REALLY GOOD . WHILE READING I WAS LEFT IN SUSPENSE AND THINK DAVID SHOULD WRITE A BOOK.
ReplyDeletei really liked ashley post it made me wont to read the hole paper i wanted to find out every thing that happen in that house.i cant wait until i get to read her final paper.
ReplyDeleteDavid Taylor really put a lot of thought and detail into his plot. Even using such a cliche attention grabber, he really turned it around into something unexpected. I would really like to see the resulting story from this "story skeleton." He could really delve into the creepy history behind the curse and have really graphic descriptions. Reading this story already put vivid imagery in my mind. And as David is an excellent writer, he could definitely make this story powerful and suspenseful. I vote for this one!
ReplyDeleteI really liked David's plot. I don't usually read books anymore unless I have to but if a book had this plot I would definitely read it. While reading it seemed like I was reading a storyline from a movie. I think David should start his own book series. I'll help him make the movie to...at the right price of course!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite plot outline was Zack's because it seemed very intriguing. It seemed like it had a lot of room for imagination and creativity. It captured my attention with the idea of someone being used by the CIA through a car crash. Being a secret agent myself (agent 007), I like the idea for this story. With lots of twists and turns this story could be real suspenseful. Keep up the good work Zack!!!!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite story is David's. His story tells you enough information to keep you intrigued, but leaves out enough for you to want more. Once his story is finished, I think it will be one of the best mysteries I have ever read.
ReplyDeleteYEAH, I THINK MINE WAS THE BEST. MINE HAD THE MOST SUSPENSE AND COULD EASILY BE TURNED INTO A FULL-LENGTH, FEATURE FILM. THE PLOT THAT I WROTE COMBINES THREE THINGS THAT EVERYONE LOVES; PIZZA, SUPERMODELS, AND LITTLE BOYS. MY PEICE WAS ALSO THE BEST BECAUSE I WAS VERY VAGUE. GOING SOLELY BASED OFF WHAT I WROTE IN THE PREVIOUS BLOG ENTRY, READERS ARE GOING TO WANT TO READ MY STORY TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite plot is zack terrys. Why you might ask? Well, because he's zack terry mainly. Another reason is because just by reading it made me interested. I think that it was very well thought out, like my story, and I could really see his story taking a lot of twists and turns, making it awesome.
ReplyDeleteSo far David Taylor's "skeleton" has been the best. It is so well detailed it sounds like a movie. I can't wait to read his full story. If he follows the plot that he shows in his skeleton, he will have one of the best mystery stories in the class. :)
ReplyDeleteMy favorite outline would have to be Mr. Scott Steiger's because he's very bright. His mystery led me to want to know more. It seemed to have a twisted plot and that had me interested.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite outline was zach terry. It gave you a sense of what the mystery was about but also left alot of room for your mind to wonder. I believe that zach has the capability to create a really suspensful, nail-biting mystery.
ReplyDeleteMy Favorite outline was David Taylor's it kept me interested and wanting to know more. I can not wait for him to write the whole story so i can find out the details of the story.
ReplyDeleteSam Agnew's response:
ReplyDeleteCandy Man's outline was definately my favorite outline. It will make for a very interesting story. My favorite part of his outline was the resolution when he said back to square one. Most stories these days have happy endings, and it was nice to hear something other than the normal for a change. Also, I thought my outline was pretty good.
Thanks,
Sam Agnew-Wieland
Steven Sullivan's response:
ReplyDeleteI really liked David's outline it was really good and i can tell he spent a lot of time on it i think it will be a really good piece!
I personally like all of them but one that stuck out was Zack, he always does awesome things but his piece had my eyes paste to the screen.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite story is Ashleys, i mostly find it the the best due to her falling action. The last line leaves the audience hanging and makes me want to read the story. I really find something like that the best way to get the attention of the reader, she makes me want to read her story to find out how it ends.I also have always liked scary stories that deal with a past history. I like how she tells of how the mansion was empty, and that leads to why the kids are in the situation they are in.
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My favorite story plot has been David's. It made me excited to see what events would be following. It catches the reader's attention and hooks them in.
Ashley said...
ReplyDeletemy favorite one is David's. It has much depth and is well thought out without giving anything away. It caught my attention because it leaves me hanging to know what's next.
My favorite plot was deffinatly David's outline. I feel that he took a lot of time and was very detailed about the plot of his story and reading his outline really showed it.
ReplyDeleteDavid's had me actually excited and wondering what was gonna happen next. Ever since I came into this class I've had a lot of respect for his art of writing. But I was still amazed that his piece was so good.
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